See now, I asked for feedback and I really did mean it. For example, Keight let me know that the bridge in Peace Bought with Blood actually sounded a little bloodthirsty.
I can see that, and I sure didn't want that, so I did a little editing and I think the result is much better, and I threw in a little more at the end to fill up the space.
Now we have...
Bridge
Oh but I see in me
the antonym of peace.
Where I would fight, you'd die
so what do I even believe?
This puts the focus more on some of the inconsistencies of our (well at least my) faith, claiming we believe in Jesus, but not really being willing to follow his example.
"Wait, hold up, you want me to die?
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